neat (haha pun....T_T) i don't really like this kind of stuff but to tell the truth its on white background.... i get tired of seeing the glowing curves of light on a black background....so yeah, way to be an individual……
come to think of it…. if you toned this down and little bit it would make a fun tattoo ^^
I am really digging the texture of th elines in this piece, how some stand out boldly ( the red ones) and how others are pushed back more. This piece is very energetic, and to me, it appears that this is always in motion and this is only a catpure of it...like if one was able to take a photo of this... the piece has alot of movement to it.
The red and black colors are a good choice, and they work really well against the light bg.
I dont know what to really say to help you improve... perhaps if the strands did not go off the page... but then again, I don't know if by having nothing run off the page would effect how energetic the piece feels. If it was surrounded by a border, the piece would probably look contained, and that would not help th epiece at all in my opinion....basically, this paragraph was pointless...LOL
I really think you have handled the piece greatly, and it looks great just the way it is.
You created this in 20 minutes? Amazing! It just looks so intricately woven yet so helter-skelter, it reminds me of an endless spiral into the realm of madness or something. The tunnel isn't solid, symbolizing that there is still a way of escape, but it's so enticing that you just want to follow it to the end to see what lies there. The red and white just make it look so crazy.